Age/Gender: 20, Male
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Job: Student
I design vehicles, structures, ect. I also write plenty of stories, scripts, and music. I also animate. So I'm an engineer/writer/anim ator/musician. Pretty sweet huh?
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Flash Reviews: 26
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I think scene 3 was especially well done. The characters behaved in a very believable manner with how they reacted to each other as they discovered they were both fighting on the same side. I'd really like to see how well you'd do if you created an animation with a more developed story rather than just non-stop action.
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One thing I really love with this animation is how well you incorporated the music into it. That really gave the animation a lot more tension and excitement. Pretty sweet
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I don't think I've watched anything that made my jaw drop like that. Bravo lol
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It's nice how simply and vague the animation is. It allows for people to interpret it different ways. I personally think the man wanted to die so he committed a crime so that he would be killed. You can even see when he gets shot he doesn't show any resistance. and only holds his gun up after waiting for a while in order to cause the police to interpret him as hostile. It seems that he must have had a very miserable and lonely life and just wanted all the pain to end. On another note the behavior of the police gives a subtle message as to what kind of society they live in. One that is very unforgiving and ignorant. Very nicely animated.
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I watched this as I was procrastinating from studying for a test of mine. Then it inspired me to finally suck it up and prepare for that test. I think I can honestly say this is the first time something on Newgrounds has inspired me to study. So um... thanks.
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The story really seems to be lacking. I've been looking at a few of you flashes and I've noticed consistent high quality animation, but just as consistent is rather dull and dragged out story lines.
This flash in particular spends over half it's time getting to the climax where the ship gets pimped out only to disappoint with an unimpressive resemblance to the show. The story overall feels empty and dull. Lastly the voices vary at different volumes and your voice was barely audible at all. Again the animation and art is excellent (except making the ship seem pimped) but the story and voice needs a lot more work.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I can try to make the plots take place at a faster pace and not drag out dialog too much. I think I put a bit less time into the ending since I had already spent so much time working on the movie and the sound was out of sync as well which made things really difficult. In the future I plan to work to make some of the voices more equal/audible or I'll just stick to text to speech. Thanks for the review.
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Was entertaining and kept me wanting more. I like how the music AND the lyrics went with the animation fluidly. That is something you don't see much now a days.
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For some of them I had to copy and pasted my screen into another program because I could have sworn it was an animation and not a standing picture. The missing piece one still has me guessing. Keep it up :D
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Dude there's this kid living on the same floor as my dorm who does nothing but mom jokes. I'm gonna take your advice on this one. What can go wrong?
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Good series. Definitely Saturday morning cartoon material.
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